Lacrimas Profundere - Short Glance Tabs

A great song and a great band. Here is my version of short glance and to me it sounds 
Its my first tab here so please rate for feedback.

Tuning Drop D


INTRO AND VERSES

e|-0--0---0--0-----|-0--0----1--1----|
B|--3------3-------|--3-------3------|
G|---3------2------|---2-------2-----|
D|-----------------|-----------------|
A|-----------------|-----------------|
D|-----------------|-----------------|

CHORUS (clean and then with light distortion)
listen to the song for the rythm

e|-1--0--1-----3---|
B|-3--1--3-----6---|
G|-3--2--2-----5---|
D|-3--2--0-----3---|
A|-1--0--0-----3---|
D|-------0-----3---|

The 2nd guitar plays this during the chorus:

e|-1--1--1--1--5--3--0--1--|
B|--3--3--3--3--3--3--3--3-|
G|-------------------------|
D|-------------------------|
A|-------------------------|
D|-------------------------|

Hope u enjoy it!
:::the splash::::