Unsigned - Unknown - Song I Made While Bored Tabs

This is a song I've made myself.
Though it would be hard for anyone to correct it,
I would like everyone to at least rate it and 
perhaps send me a comment about it.
Also, if anyone could find the time to perhaps 
make a bass-part for the song and send it to me,
I'd appreciate it.
I will be including more as I come up with more,
as this isn't the complete song.

Standard tuning.

Since I can't tell you the way I play it,
you'll just have to try out the speed that suits you best.
But I usually play this first part in a steady,
easy tempo.
This would be the "verse".

e:--------------|----------------|----------------|
B:-----4---4---4|-------4---4---4|-------4---4---4|
G:---5---5---5--|-----5---5---5--|-----5---5---5--|
D:-3------------|-3--------------|----------------|
A:--------------|---4------------|-4--------------|
E:--------------|----------------|---4------------|

e:-----|
B:-----|
G:-----|
D:-----|
A:-----|
E:-4p3-|

And here comes a rough shape of the "chorus". 

e:-------------------|--------------------------|
B:---------12--12--12|--------------------------|
G:-------13--13--13--|---------------13--13--13-|
D:-11>11-------------|-11-11-------11--11--11---|
A:-------------------|-------12>12--------------|
E:-------------------|--------------------------|

e:-------------------------|
B:---------------12--12--12|
G:-------------------------|
D:-------------11--11--11--|
A:-12-12-------------------|
E:-------12>12-------------|

-Bridge-

e:----------------------------------|
B:----------------------------------|
G:----------------------------------|
D:----------------------------------|
A:----------------------------------|
E:-12--12>13t--13--13p11>11t--11-12t|

Here's my e-mail-address: merlins_apprentice@angelfire.com